as i started on the ident , i realised that i actually liked the full layout and design idea from this piece , however i wanted to get more feedback on the animatic based on what i had created. it was very simple and i liked the way it looped itself and it seemed creative. the final slide where its showing the axe , i thought it might need more work since its very random and it doesnt really fit with the whole animation. if anything i felt as if it needed a storyline to be added for the axe to fit in however with some feedback i would be able to develop the idea further.