this is the first scene where the big sister is looking towards the camera and the mother comes in to look from her pov whats happened to her daughters face.
POV- mums view of the daughters face.
- needs to be coloured in
- needs to be more cleaned /linework wise
- backrounds needed.
The mum notices the younger sister (MC) looking from the corner and she embraces both of them before telling them to get ready for school.
- Needs linework to be neat
- needs details added in
- backrounds needed
- longer POV shot of the younger sister
- voice actors needed to see what it will turn out like when rendered and finalised.
this scene is both the sisters walking to school and the older sisters hair strand comes in her face , shes now worried because she sees mortality police.
- needs to be extended to show fear
- needs to show power in this scene
- backrounds needed ( reference still is being looked at)
The morality police coming forward and the older sister stops in her tracks because of fear.
- this scene needs to be more emphasised because its still rough
- theres not much terror showing
- maybe adding more of the morality police coming ?
- backround needs working on as well.
this is the last scene ( still unfinished) , this is where the mum and the younger sister go to find the older daughter since shes gone missing and the mum finds out that her daughter has died.
- need a backround ( will be hard to find since the police stations in iran are very broad and arnt the same as anywhere else so i need a proper reference)
- i need voice actors in this scene to emphasise on the broken heart of the mother
- since the sister is too young i want her to say something only kids would say in that situation ( more emphasis on the emotion)
This is some of the files that havnt been rendered or shown , theres more im working on and i need to make sure i finish them and also work with robin now for the backround designs .
There is a fighting scene where thats part of the younger sisters imagination that needs completing and im using rotoscoping to make sure it looks crisp and neat.
These for now have been numbered and some have name files so i dont get confused.