this presentation was just a summary of last time i did a presentation, however this time i have made sure to showcase the video/vision with the audio , and music , i also made sure to edit it the way the final animatic would be.
however once I showed this my tutors still said that there was quite a lot missing such as the emphasis on the hair and maybe to add a few scenes that would show a powerful message about the hair since there wasn’t a lot of detail showing what it’s about nor was there an indication showing where the animation was directly going, they also told me that to make sure to touch up some of the scenes with the morality police to show real fear within the main characters and of course to take in some personal tutorials to make sure everything goes as planned.