for this presentation i did add a few stuff to it more such as showing more of the hair scene by adding an extra scene of where the older sister is fixing the younger sisters scarf, however still i didnt like it and therefore wanted to make sure that the older sister instead gets more screen time than the younger sister .
This was after taking some tutorials with my tutor darren as he suggested a few ideas that kind of sparked a new idea for me , so i thought if i would have more time then maybe i could add more to this animatic to make it even more better and well more developed.