this is our interim 2 presentation and the second client briefing we had for NHS to see.
we were given criticism for the last page of the keyframes where theres a hospital scene. they thought it was scary and so it didn’t really fit well, other than that we have achieved the fear factor of having prostate cancer which is what they liked.
however we still have to work on improving the last scene to make it less scary .
Another feedback we got was that the music that we used , we cant use things that will have watermark on them and it could lead to demonetisation since we don’t own the audio , however we could make our own soundtrack and add it in there but for now we haven’t decided on what yet.