Author: Kiyana Khadivfard

This is the final work of the FMP.

i added subtitles , and made my own music that gradually increases, voice overs are done by both me and my sister.

These are the new scenes with their backgrounds finalised and edited. For the fighting scene, I made sure there was some type of glitch effect to it to make it seem like it was a hazy dream, towards the last scene I planned on having a sad ending where the glitch finally occurs and it switches to the final ending scene with the main character remembering only minor things from her past. That’s why the glitches occur to show that she doesn’t remember anything else that happened after that.

These are some of the backgrounds that I’ve done and worked on, they each are placed during the middle scene and the ending scene, i went with the consistency of keeping the black and white theme.

so for this presentation, I didn’t get a chance to present, however, this is what I have so far based on the recent tutorials with Darren, i thought of my animation and thought about how I’ve been burnt out and I really couldn’t do the animation anymore however, my tutor Darren did mention that i should add in the new scenes just to receive feedback and to make sure that i shouldn’t worry if the animation is not finished yet, since i still have a lot more to do and i am doing this all by myself such as the colouring and the movement of the animatic. i made sure to add two scenes that I have made a drastic change to.

This is test 1

This is test 2

for this presentation i did add a few stuff to it more such as showing more of the hair scene by adding an extra scene of where the older sister is fixing the younger sisters scarf, however still i didnt like it and therefore wanted to make sure that the older sister instead gets more screen time than the younger sister .

This was after taking some tutorials with my tutor darren as he suggested a few ideas that kind of sparked a new idea for me , so i thought if i would have more time then maybe i could add more to this animatic to make it even more better and well more developed.

this presentation was just a summary of last time i did a presentation, however this time i have made sure to showcase the video/vision with the audio , and music , i also made sure to edit it the way the final animatic would be.

however once I showed this my tutors still said that there was quite a lot missing such as the emphasis on the hair and maybe to add a few scenes that would show a powerful message about the hair since there wasn’t a lot of detail showing what it’s about nor was there an indication showing where the animation was directly going, they also told me that to make sure to touch up some of the scenes with the morality police to show real fear within the main characters and of course to take in some personal tutorials to make sure everything goes as planned.

based on the last presentation, i made sure to put everything that was missing from the first few and added them all together to make a W.I.P. animatic to showcase what my vision is like, this is what i came up with. There are still many to do and many to work on such as colouring and everything else such as backgrounds which will be hard to find since i don’t currently live in Iran.

for this presentation, I did make it clear to my tutors that the schedule will be there to show when the animatic is due to finish without having a set date, but what is more important is what i will be focusing on throughout to get this animation finished.

The main concerns for this animation from my tutors were that since there will be a script to follow , they need to see it come all together even if it still is a work in progress in order to give proper feedback to see if its at a green light stage and or if it still needs more improving .

I made sure that within the script i was following what I had intended to translate into my own language (Farsi) to make sure that the animation would be also set in Iran. My tutors again recommended me to start working on this and putting it together to see how it would fit the timeline and if it would match, so that way when we do have another presentation i would be able to show them what to agree and disagree on.

so far I’ve coloured in the 1st,2nd and third scenes, i need to colour in the rest and then put in the remaining backgrounds and I should be able to continue with the sound and then the editing of the animatic, then it will be finalised so not a lot left.

This is the script ill be using when adding in everything so every scene will be in the same position and to make sure that the storyline matches, i will also be using this for reference when I do want to add in the voiceover to the animatic.